Revised my draft

I had 5 drafts on my Memoir paper because I am not a good writer but I am not quitter; which means I can work on it. My first draft was embarrassing, to compare with my final draft. I went to tutors two times to correct my grammar mistakes and they gave me an ideas about how I can improve my essay. Final draft revised by my classmate. He gave me a couple of ideas about essay and I liked his idea. I rewrote my introduction before I submit my final version to my instructor. I wish I could talk my instructor more about my papers and listen her advises but somehow it never happened.